Does Patriotism Still Matter?
Isaac Reyes
Does patriotism still matter? When I hear those words I feel weird. Does it matter? I mean some people don’t care. Some people have no heart, does it matter? It might not matter for you but somebody out there has a sibling protecting and serving our country. Imagine us kids, teachers and parents were slaves….
What would our world be if people weren’t fighting all the time, peaceful, but its not. We as citizens of the United States of America could do one simple thing to help, care. It doesn’t take much to care but some people find it difficult. It matters all the time every time we smile every time we eat a good meal every time you’re in the arms of your mother or father it still matters.
Some families hope to see there patriot one more time but some times they can’t. Imagine you come home one day and your mom is not there a lot of people have to deal with that. Does it matter if soldiers don’t come back from a war? Does it matter if you lost that special some one in your heart?
We can all be patriots by just doing something kind for our country. Just by showing a simple act of kindness a good deed you and I could become a patriot, let’s start by writing this paper.
Does patriotism still matter?...... YES!
Nice job,Isaac! This was an ok post. I discovered that you focused on the main idea and you used questions which was good. In order to enhance your writing, you could of not put the word, matter a lot and do not use to many questions in your writing. Most importantly, you need to add more in your writing. So if I were you, I would add much more than that like express how you feel about it. Overall you did a nice job!
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